Wednesday, June 01, 2005

My thoughts for some current events, so to say.

It is hard, you know,
To see those around you shattering,
Slowly self destructing,
It pains me,
That it does..

I'll walk, talk and smile through it all,
For if I am not strong, how can they be?
If I shatter, who will help them stand?
If I do not stand, how can they?
If I fall, how will they prevent themselves from doing so?

I'll stand strong for them, and myself,
I am the strength, the key existance,
I am the one they look to, to save them from their troubles,
I am the key that unlocks their minds, from overflowing with pain,
I am the one they ease their pains onto, for I shall stand.

All my life it is going on, I am the key source, the storer of trouble, pain, and suffering.
Everyday it is the same, unchanging,
Everyday it is a different person, wanting the same as the others,
Everyday it is like the one before, never to be changed for the better,
Everyday it is my life like this, times are never to be changing, I am here to be for you.

6 Comments:

Blogger Kaps said...

Hi Solin !

You don't know me.. I was impressed by the sincerity with which you read the poems and commented what you felt..on poemsdilse.blogspot.com

Now this post is essentially a noble thought.. to say the least..(I observe u are pretty laconic in commenting..unfortunately.. I am just the opposite :D)..It includes audacity (+ve connotation) .. also realisation of the responsibility ..and ofcourse.. it displays your benevolence towards your near n dear 1s (I bet they are very Lucky)..:-)

ALl the best

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Blogger Whisper said...

^_^ Thanks much, really so. And I am glad to have your comment.

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Blogger Daphnewood said...

and I am here for you. Don't forget that! You don't always have to be strong. I am only saying this just in case this poem was not hypothetical ;)

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Blogger Jeremy said...

Hi-really enjoyed looking through your works, thought your honesty was amazing and loved you individual and very direct style. Thank you also for your comments on my works ( jemidgimi.blogspot.com ) they were very much appreciated! jeremy :)

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